Comments on: Started Small

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Wed, 29 Apr 2009 14:40:00 +0000

Hello L Venkata,

Thanks and happy blog hopping.

By: L. Venkata Subramaniam

L. Venkata Subramaniam — Wed, 29 Apr 2009 08:01:00 +0000

my earlier comment was actually for this story.

I love the suspense that you create in your stories.

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Tue, 28 Apr 2009 17:02:00 +0000

Hi Roy,

Thanks, you too congrats, you’re ranked 3, wow! Keep writing.

By: Roy

Roy — Tue, 28 Apr 2009 00:26:00 +0000

Hi Jena!

Congratulations!

your story is included in the top pick for the week!

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Mon, 27 Apr 2009 14:32:00 +0000

Hi Sumit,

I'm absolutely honored by your visit. And your feedback is well appreciated. I will remember your pointer when I re-write.

Thanks again and do click the home button to read all the other articles.

Regards and all the best!

By: Sumit

Sumit — Mon, 27 Apr 2009 14:21:00 +0000

Hello Jena. Read the piece. To say the least, its well written.
when u enlarge it, u can keep a better link. i dont mean u have not kept it of course. i could pick just one instance- the advice of mom.
in an enlarged version filling such a gap would be better perhaps.
Really impressed by all the details of the life of a street child that you have given in the article.

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 12:33:00 +0000

Hi Mike,

This is one of your rare visits and I appreciate it a lot. Thanks for your kind words. God bless.

By: Mike Foster

Mike Foster — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 07:00:00 +0000

Cool story. I like Miguelitto!

peace,
mike
livelife365

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 02:36:00 +0000

Hi Z,

Thanks, you could write one yourself. You're a good story-teller too.
God bless.

By: zorlone

zorlone — Sun, 19 Apr 2009 23:42:00 +0000

I was half expecting tragedy from this story. hehehe. Maybe I woke up from the wrong side of the bed today.

This story is so heart pounding. I felt like I was Miguelito.

Okay, where can I sign up for a summer class in story telling?

Z